物理 Books are an upward ladder, a healing medicine
If a person does not read books, their values are determined by the people around them because they have no other ways of input and can only imitate those around them or gradually be changed by the environment. Following whatever is around you, you can never find yourself. Even if you don't remember the contents, reading nourishes your soul. The books you have read are still in your speech, in your temperament, in the vastness of your mind and spirit. Books are an upward ladder, a healing medicine; they are a good way to enlighten wisdom and a place to awaken the mind. Books can lead to a thousand different lives. Those who do not read can only live once. Reading allows you to look up at the stars, even if you are stuck in mud.
由于本人水平有限，一些错误在所难免，如有问题，帮忙指证
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Chuyi Lu
3天前
同学你好，这里我想提出一些小的建议，可以酌情参考一下哦！
1. 在第一句话中，"they have no other ways of input"这句话是 gramatically possible 的，但如果要更加native（本地）一些的话，改成"ways to provide input," "ways of giving input"或"ways of inputting"会更好一些。因为 input是不可数的名词，而ways是可数名词，两个联用听起来会有些奇怪。
2.同时你的第一句第二部分有些太长了，一次性读起来会有些吃力，可以适当加一些断句，如果你是喜欢写长句这种风格就当我没说。
3.句子 "Fallowing whatever is around you"是想表达跟随身边的一切吗？改成 Fallowing things around you" or "fallowing everything around you"会更好一些，反正is在这里是肯定不能当连词使用的。
这些可能只是一部分建议，如果你想再double check一下你的语法的话可以把这个喂给deep seek，它可以给你举一些更加地道的表达。同时我写英语论文时喜欢用一个软件叫" Grammarly"(好象是叫这个吧？）它可以指出你文章中的语法错误，更主要是它是免费的，且不用外网，在必应（bing.cim）上应该就可以搜到。
加油！
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幸福健康
3天前
Huh, weird‥‥‥was the last post deleted? Did it get removed because too many people spammed the comments? (Apologies for the spam comments ,I'll delete my comment immediately if you like it)