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为高中英语做准备!!!就是在这个帖子里把颗棵根据上一届学长写过的作文题目写的作文改出来的二稿打出来~~各位大佬也可以提出一些建议

 在数学面前,无处遁逃!

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今天发的奥本海默观后感英语作文调整了一下格式,没关了不少,不得不说前两天发的对比之下很不耐看

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11月前

[应用文写作通知布告]

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             A striking event "English Song Competition" is just around the corner, the purpose of which is to stimulate our interest in English learning.
      And everyone is expected to get involved in it.

             Participating in the event is of great benefit. We can develop English ability and expand our social circle at the same time. If you're willing
      to engage in it, please record a video and submit your work before April 8th. The lyrics are supposed to be positive and inspiring. There are also
      a variety of details which will help you get extra scores, consisting of original spots, musical instruments and dancing performance. You are
      welcome to have a try.
       
             We sincerely extend an invitation to all of you! Looking forward to your creative works!


    




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11月前
阿嘎哇,这个太长了懒得打字了

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惠元
11月前

我一个高中牲已经汗流浃背了啊,第一段就一堆词不认识🤣

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11月前

[应用文写作之建议信]

Hi Richel,

          Hope this email finds you well. I understand that starting high school can be a bit overwhelming and it's normal to feel unsure about making new friends. Don't be worry, I'm here to help! Here are some suggestions on how to expand your social circle:

         Initially, smile and be friendly. A warm smile goes a long way in making a good impression. Try to approach people with a positive attitude and show genuine interest in getting to know them. In addition, learn to listen. Pay attention to what others are saying and show empathy. People appreciate when they feel heard and understood. Furthermore, be willing to express yourself. This will give you opportunities to connect with like-minded individuals. Lastly, be helpful. Offer your assistance whenever you can as being helpful is a great way to foster relationships. 

       Remember, making friends takes time. There are plenty of opportunities in high school to form lasting friendships. If you need any further advice, feel free to reach out to me. Best of luck!

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely,

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Helene

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天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续
11月前

感觉有用zx-sunpeng1@2x

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11月前

接下来就要分享我最得意的文章,是奥本海默上映的时候我写的观后感,当时因该是假期去放松看的,看完之后觉得拍的的确很好,也很有心得所以就写了一篇稍稍有点小长的文,还有一点巧合就是小标题是美国的普罗米修斯,没想到和一个美国的奥本海默人物传记著作撞了名,纯属巧合(当时影片开头有这麽一个比喻我觉得很贴切很精彩就借作题目了)

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                                                                                                                     Oppenheimer, the American Prometheus

                                                                                                                                                                  Prometheus endured a cruel punishment for stealing fire.

                        Robert Oppenheimer, an exceptential quantum physics theorist known as the "Father of the atomic bomb", led the Manhattan Project

                which aimed to research and develop weapons during World War Ⅱ. As the project's leader, he oversaw the construction of a small town

                called Los Alamos and held various positions of authority. Over a period of two years, he dedicated himself to the task of ending the war

                quickly and ensuringz the safe return of sodiers. Driven by a strong sense of purpose, they spared no effort in their pursuit of a miracle,

                despite the immense time pressure.

                        Alongside his heavy responsibilities and burdens, Oppenheimer grapped with ethical dilemmas, fully aware of the devastating power

                of the atomic bomb and the loss of innocent lives it entailed. He detested failure and wished to prevent such tragedies.

                        When the rose-colored mushroom cloud illuminated the horizon, Pandora's box had been opened.

                        After the bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, Oppenheimer felt as though his hands were stained with blood, leading him to deeply

                reflect on the moral and ethical implications of nuclear weapons.Post-war, he advocated for nuclear non-proliferation and the peaceful use

                of nuclear energy, leveraging his reputation.However, when he became embroiled in America's messy politics, his aggression and outspoken

                nature offended many people. During a discussion on uranium exports to the Netherlands, Oppenheimer refuted Louis Strauss and humiliated

                him, causing Strauss to hold a grudge and seek revenge. This eventually resulted in Oppenheimer having his security clearance revoked.

                        Examining Oppenheimer's life, we find a combination of extreme contradictions: ambitious yet insecure, brilliant yet childish, deceitful yet

                confused. He was Oppenheimer, a martyr for peace–an American Prometheus.

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11月前

为什麽要把照片贴在帖顶呢?一是这个帖子太惨凉,而是因为今天A哥@Avaik. 才回归,估计是没看到的(毕竟他的爆照颗棵还是看了所以不能昧纸良心让他就这麽错过了)

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天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续
11月前

漂亮的zx-sunpeng2@2x

好多单词不认识,佬太强了zx-duxiaoyu1@2x

PS:能不能发一些关于读后续写的作文?

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回复 天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续
11月前
em,情况是这样的,颗棵还没学过读后续写,但是今天我可以试一下,读后续写我可以找我邻居(校友学霸学长)薅点资料今天学着写一篇,但是应该对你帮助不会太大,因为我是颗-小白-棵,你有哪些单词不懂可以写下来查翻译笔或者问颗棵吖
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天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续 回复
11月前

小白棵❌

英语大佬✅

话说颗棵考级了吗

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回复 天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续
11月前

没有考过级哦,你不问我都不太清楚可不可以考哦,真的是小白啊,我一起上英语的一个男生四六级已经背完了呜

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天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续 回复
11月前

天^(-1)zx-huangqiao2@2x

颗棵是会多国语言吗?(👉名字)

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回复 天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续
11月前

确实会多国语言(中英法,法比英还要学的早是从很小时候开始接触的,但是现在接触的少了而且本身也比较复杂分的很细所以也就忘了个七七八八了,日语只会麻人的和一些常用的特殊的和好记得而且发现有的词男生女生说还不一样,是我们班一个很喜欢日语自学完了的女生给教的)但是名字的希伯来文颗棵不是会只是用来做名字而已,哈哈~你好像是第一个问颗棵这个的人

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天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续 回复
11月前

天啊,法语!jj-zhenjing(可见颗棵的家庭教育很好呀,竟然比英语还早学)

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重生之我在质心搞事情
11月前

jj-dalao好腻害!字也很好看

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回复 重生之我在质心搞事情
11月前

谢谢吖~~

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回复 天 希望破灭之时,由我来继续
11月前

还好叭,不然也不会在质心遇到你们这些大佬吖

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南虞
11月前

好看哇jj-bixin

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绳网用户2567
11月前

好看哇jj-bixin

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绳网用户2567
11月前

说实话,第二行第二个很像我之前一个同学。

勾起我一段不太美好的回忆。(_ _)


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Avaik.
11月前
颗棵好可爱www
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11月前
A哥你终于出现了!终于可以取下来了~~呼~~我等会要去打球了可能聊不了太久